You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager.
In your letter
explain why you want to take time off work
give details of the amount of time you need
suggest how your work could be covered while you are away
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to request one month break, and I will present from the first of June.
As you know, in recent two months we working hard to prepare the financial statement and respond to auditor question. Because some problems that our company had with the financial system. Although we force to working a lot in overtime, my colleague and I can prepare statements and give the clear audit report from our independent auditor on time.
I am too tired after this days if it possible I want to travel to my homeland for have rest and visit my family after two years when I immigrate to this city. Because the long way I want one month to rest to be fresh and come back before starting interim financial statement on June.
In the following month, we have not an important issue, but I told anything’s might happen to our expert colleague Sara who is really skillful in her jobs.
I would appreciate your reply with a confirmation as I have requested.
Yours sincerely,
Jack Brown
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tement and respond to auditor question. Because some problems that our company had with...
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Line 7, column 22, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...uditor on time. I am too tired after this days if it possible I want to travel to...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69832402235 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58750300698 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659217877095 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1185272243 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4444444444 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142111628006 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551676960442 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398895728386 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0549258898666 0.12726935374 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461499888825 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.