Dear Sir / Madam,
I hope you doing good. I had an interview last month in your head office campus and I have been offered a job to start a new career as a senior technical lead. I must agree to the fact that both job description and paycheck offered by MTech organization are by far the best in industry. However, I have decided to continue in my current job.
I sincerely apologies for the inconvenience caused by me. I have an active bond period with my current organization, which last till next year August. Apparently, I calculated it the wrong way and I thought it was expired last August itself. During the interview, I was really overwhelmed by the hospitality of your team members. I sincerely apologies down from my heart, for all the extra hard work your team has to put in for me.
On the other hand, I am enjoying my current job and it did give me plenty of chances to become a potential employee. My manager has been supportive starting from day one in my job.
I would like to keep the communication channel open between both parties and look forward to further correspondence.
Yours Sincerely
Sudheerkumar Motakalta
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Are you missing a verb?
...cided to continue in my current job. I sincerely apologies for the inconvenience caused by me. I h...
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Message: Are you missing a verb?
...the hospitality of your team members. I sincerely apologies down from my heart, for all the extra h...
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Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...look forward to further correspondence. Yours Sincerely Sudheerkumar Motakalta ...
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Line 7, column 23, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Yours Sincerely Sudheerkumar Motakalta
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, however, look, really, as to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 940.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65346534653 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85786469563 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643564356436 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3859351155 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.3076923077 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5384615385 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130098584155 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422536371621 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397884100521 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0548632743164 0.12726935374 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664169738194 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.