You cannot pick your friend up at the airport Write a letter to him her In your letter you should explain the reasons You should provide him her with alternative ways to go to the hotel You should inform him her of your plan

Dear Pooja,

Hope you are in pink of health? We are eagerly waiting to see you tomorrow. Unfortunately, I am writing to inform you that am unable to pick you up from the airport personally. I am so sorry that I overlooked my schedule and hence will have to book you a taxi instead. Therefore, you will have to take the taxi first and directly head to your hotel.

As you know my parents also arrived the previous night from India, I have already booked the Universal Studios for them and will be accompanying them for the full day. This is one of the must visit tourist destinations and will keep us occupied for the full day. We shall be free by 6p.m just before the dinner time. Hence, I am planning to pick you up from your hotel later in the evening. Meanwhile, you might want to rest and freshen up. Also I have planned a welcome dinner for you. We all can then enjoy and celebrate this moment. Looking forward to our fun times together.

Please accept my sincere apologies for not picking you up from the airport. Hope you will forgive me for this. See you soon with lots of love. Have a safe flight.

Warm wishes,
Nur Amirah

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Average: 8.1 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 442, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... you might want to rest and freshen up. Also I have planned a welcome dinner for you...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, look, so, then, therefore, while, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45283018868 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31707024597 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61320754717 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7513211402 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 52.4444444444 76.5299724578 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.7777777778 16.8248392259 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256614491886 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909372304026 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799809034485 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202145645893 0.12726935374 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049094056983 0.0580467560999 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.4 8.37731958763 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.64 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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