Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my gratitude for the service you offered last week when I visited your restaurant along with my friends to celebrate my birthday. It was one of the most memorable birthday events in my life and I would love to recommend your restaurant to my acquaintances.
The atmosphere inside the restaurant was very soothing and relaxing, such as the decoration of sparkling lights and soft background music. We ordered a Chinese menu which are tasty and well presented. All of us thoroughly enjoy the food. In addition, we received prompt service and the waiters were quite friendly. I cannot forget that your staff offering a complimentary birthday cake. The whole birthday party is unforgettable.
However, I have a suggestion that you may think of introducing some discount cards or a special menu to draw customer attention. I hope that you would consider this suggestion.
Once again, I would like to thank you for making my birthday celebration special and worth enjoying.
Yours Faithfully,
Chris Wong
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, well, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 888.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13294797688 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93769031572 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.676300578035 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0372530986 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4166666667 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347772997635 0.216113520407 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964528843417 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702714243442 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16657050251 0.12726935374 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073356592621 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.