Dear Dr.Frankfultstein,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction about your college’s one-day-crash course. It is far too expensive.
It was a full day program designed on machine learning explaining and providing the possible uses as well as its benefits to the business.
Similar topics are also provided by Harvard College in Arizona, Stanford Institute of Fine Arts in California, and Massachusetts School of Trumping Business in Missouri at a low, low price of $79.99. I was assuming a higher price point, $199.99 in your college, would be significantly better than others. The first time I found your college has an average 4.99 rating on Google Review. After finishing the course, I found all the reviewers share a common last name, Frankfultstein, I doubt none of them are unbiased, or even authentic.
Then I called my new friend I met during your one-day-course, guess what I learned? Jace only paid $59.99, after he battered for a few minutes. I don’t get why such few minutes would cost me so much. I am a broke young man; I can’t throw money into a rabbit hole like this.
I hereby declare a refund of $140 and your apology.
Your Worst Nightmare
Andrew Yonge
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Frankfultstein
Dear Dr.Frankfultstein, I am writing this letter to express m...
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Line 3, column 56, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to explain'.
Suggestion: to explain
...ay program designed on machine learning explaining and providing the possible uses as well...
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Line 4, column 44, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ilar topics are also provided by Harvard College in Arizona, Stanford Institute o...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ow money into a rabbit hole like this. I hereby declare a refund of 40 and your ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1004.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94581280788 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11270805612 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 127.690721649 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.753694581281 0.622605031667 121% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3662065995 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.2307692308 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6153846154 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30769230769 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11240566688 0.216113520407 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0343997224195 0.0766984524023 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388874391022 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0511369878938 0.12726935374 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418808643422 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.