Dear Sir or Madam,
This letter is to express concerns about regular evening shows that are being broadcasted by your station. Let me elaborate on why these are irrelevant and suggest some alternative ideas.
The current programs involve indecent and vulgar content which is unsuitable for children. Since I prefer spending this after-work time with family members, such uninteresting screening makes everyone uncomfortable and spoil children inevitably.
It would be much appreciated if you could display movies relating to science, religion or technology. Many producers these days provide TV series based on advancements occurring in the system that would practically influence our lives.
These TV shows develops youngster's intellectual skills in an entertaining way by create curiosity among them. As a result, parents could have useful conversations to clarify their doubts, and thereby broaden their horizons. Besides, the whole family can spend quality time and relax after hectic work schedules.
I hope you would consider my suggestion and alter the content screened in evenings.
Yours faithfully,
Pardeep Kumar
M.No: 0431536668
Email:pardeepkumar0492@gmail.com
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, This letter is to express concerns about...
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Message: Consider replacing "in an entertaining way" with adverb for "entertaining"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...develops youngsters intellectual skills in an entertaining way by create curiosity among them. As a re...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: No
... Yours faithfully, Pardeep Kumar M.No: 0431536668 Email:pardeepkumar0492@gma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1028.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.01169590643 4.54256449028 132% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.50499797041 2.54303337028 138% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.812865497076 0.622605031667 131% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.41237113402 127% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.2578077177 44.8134815571 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.4545454545 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5454545455 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132663385223 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432948292171 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469109990183 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0580758036225 0.12726935374 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485200693379 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 8.37731958763 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 70.7449484536 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.28 8.71597938144 198% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.84 7.59969072165 143% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 41.2886597938 170% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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