Dear Prof. James,
I am writing a letter to formally request to drop out from two courses which were Signal Processing and Control of telecommunication.
I am taking six courses this semester, and I finding it extremely difficult to manage. At the beginning of the term, the laboratory session hasn’t been arranged on the timetable yet. However, I found that the lab classes of these two courses totally collided with the class time of my core class.
Therefore, I have no other choice but to decrease my course load. I am planning on taking the two courses this summer semester. I would like to complete all the courses for the degree program by the following year, and I decided to withdraw from these two courses after careful consideration.
I would like to request the tuition refund and hope I am not late to receive the full reimbursement.
Thank you for your time and consideration. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours Sincerely,
Chris Wong
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 820.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93975903614 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87207284703 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632530120482 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8276793213 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5454545455 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0909090909 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235013009317 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795962210338 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545367506208 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118586725133 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668142465853 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.78 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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