You have been asked by a good friend to be his/her marriage witness. The wedding will take place on a working day which means you will have to take a day off from work. However, you have recently started working at this company and do not have leave time. One of your colleagues has offered to help you by taking your responsibilities for that day.
Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter
. Thank your friend
. Describe the work duties your colleagues will have to perform for you
. Offer your colleagues some compensation for doing this favour.
Dear Ram,
I have no words to express my gratitude for your kind offer to cover me on next Friday at work. I was not expecting the friend’s wedding at weekdays but marriage registrar fixed the date on Friday.
As you know, mainly I am involved in client interaction and our client M/S Rodrigo schedule a meeting on next Friday. The main agenda in the meeting will be presentation from our side and for that I have already prepared the power point slides and proposal. Though, presentation is simple, I have compiled all the previous communication with Rodrigo representative. In fact, I have informed to client as well about my unavoidable leave and requested to co-operate with you. I am sending you the power point files in email and will have internal meeting at Thursday in order to clear any doubts you have.
I am grateful to you that you saved me and commitments made to my friend would be honored by me because of you. I will meet you on Monday lunch at river side café where will get an update about the meeting. In future, if you ever need my help, please ping me
Best Regards,
Pomu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 112, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... would be honored by me because of you. I will meet you on Monday lunch at river ...
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Line 4, column 207, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'In the future'?
Suggestion: In the future
...e will get an update about the meeting. In future, if you ever need my help, please ping ...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, well, in fact, kind of, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56783919598 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63694155627 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613065326633 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 17.201453427 44.8134815571 38% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.9 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326804943191 0.216113520407 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124371075783 0.0766984524023 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625701316871 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201824715737 0.12726935374 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436730620023 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.