You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately because of a previous appointment you cannot come at the time they wish.
Write a letter to the admissions tutor and explain your position. Apologise and offer to come on another day or later the same day. Ask also how long the interview will be and whether there will be any tests during it.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I write to inform you of my abscence at the interview slated for Tuesday, 2nd April, 2019 according to your last coorespondence. I appreciate that your letter was sent in due time, however, I already booked an appointment with my dentist to remove a hole in a tooth of mine that same day.
I deeply apologise for any inconvenience this might bring. I would have suggested a change of the interview time from 12 noon to 3 pm (after my appointment), but, considering the fact that it is a week day and I’m going to be treated at a general hospital, there might be a long queue waiting to also be attended to. Furthermore, I don’t know how severe the resulting pain might be and I would not forgive myself if my performance at the interview is marred because of my inability to speak well.
I would like to propose that my interview be rescheduled till the 9th of April, exactly a week from the previous date.
With respect to information in your previous letter, I would like to find out how long the interview would be and what materials I should bring along. Would there be another test or was the first stage test sufficient for evaluation?
Thank you for your consideration. I await a kind response.
Yours faithfully,
Odunayo Adekoya.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'April 2019'.
Suggestion: April 2019
...t the interview slated for Tuesday, 2nd April, 2019 according to your last coorespondence. ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...le in a tooth of mine that same day. I deeply apologise for any inconvenience ...
^
Line 5, column 60, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...for any inconvenience this might bring. I would have suggested a change of the in...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, well, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1059.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72767857143 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88717130274 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607142857143 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.1608584026 44.8134815571 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2727272727 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3636363636 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 4.34317383033 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189424370296 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761533567839 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517670328642 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108691737175 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472143293397 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.