You have been selected for a training course on computer skills that you cannot attend. Write a letter to your employer and say:
Explain how this training course would help you
Why won’t you be able to attend it
Suggest a way to have that training again
Dear Sir,
I, Nalin Dhand, working as sales manager in your company AMDOCS Ltd. is being selected for a training course by IBM. one of the biggest it companies of the world. I know it sounds unbelievable and a dream but it's real.
this course is based on office management and Desktop Publishing which is one of its kind. The demand of this course is huge in the market people are earning lots of money and are getting more and more opportunities to grow in their career. there are basically five companies that are offering this course and one of them is International Business Machine. The programmes available in this training can help me a lot in adding a new feather to my cap. As Microsoft office is one of the best softwares and to master it completely within 3 months is a big deal.
Unfortunately, as it may sound strange but I might not be able to attend this workshop for training as my family is suffering from COVID-19 lately and there is no one to take care of them. So, I need to be at home to give them support and care. I know it kinds of ruins one of the biggest opportunities for me but first priority for any person is his family.
I request you to let me attend me this course for the next month as the admission for this course is open again and I am still enough eligible to get admission in this course due to my earlier credentials.
Thanking you
Yours Faithfully
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I, Nalin Dhand, working as sales manager...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
... selected for a training course by IBM. one of the biggest it companies of the worl...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...nbelievable and a dream but its real. this course is based on office management an...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
... opportunities to grow in their career. there are basically five companies that are o...
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Line 7, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ntials. Thanking you Yours Faithfully
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, may, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.48453608247 240% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1138.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 260.0 206.0 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37692307692 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56669612422 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561538461538 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 364.5 290.88556701 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.325939259 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2857142857 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.85714285714 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26294743934 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870808482627 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0915290204719 0.0603063233224 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145407871082 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473873881401 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.