Dear Alex,
I hope you are well, I am writing this letter to you to inform that I will not be able to attend the play on this Saturday night. I understand that I have purchased two tickets in advance for me and you, however, I just received a telephone call from my manager and he requested me if I can cover the evening shift on this Saturday. Unfortunately, no one is available to work on that day so he insisted me and I could not say no to him since he heavily relies on me and trusts me. Also, if I can display a great extent of diligence then my promotion is inevitable, as you know I have been waiting for it for a quite long time.
However, my cousin Anne is in town and interested in seeing the play on Saturday so she can join you if it is alright with you. I can also send the tickets along with her so you do not have to worry about picking them up. Otherwise, I can request the theater manager to cancel and refund the money.
Please let me know your thoughts about it. In the future, I will make sure this does not happen again. Please accept my sincere apologies.
Yours sincerely
Dave
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 787.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.2311827957 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33559302899 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612903225806 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4383441311 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2444634995 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917372383758 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650657548516 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139902334525 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608959776684 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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