You have bought a new camera but when you got it home you found it had some problems You returned the camera and spoke to the company representative a week ago but the camera has still not been repaired Write a letter to the company In your letter Introdu

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter for complaining you about the inconvinience happened to me from the camera of your esteemed brand.

Few days back, I ordered a Canaon DS100 camera from your official website with invoice no 3THY7. At the time of delivery it was found broken, and I immediately returned by calling your technical support team. Since, it comes with insurance policy I got an assurance for replacement within 7 days.

Now, 10 days were passed and still, I didn't received my product yet. This was purchased to take part in a photography competition but it seems I could no longer compete. All this had made me dishearted.

I would like you to deliver my camera by this week failing to which I will take a legal action. Moreover, I had spent 10 Dollars for entering this competition and I request you to compensate this amount for all this trouble.

I hope you will give due consideration to this letter, and may revert at earliest time of your convenience.

Yors faithfully,
Roma Cook.

Votes
Average: 8.9 (2 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 39, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... Now, 10 days were passed and still, I didnt received my product yet. This was purch...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, may, moreover, still

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80113636364 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7529508492 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659090909091 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2369405162 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8181818182 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.27272727273 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223745124084 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760593302691 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727528190199 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13241293591 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721294419762 0.0580467560999 124% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.