Dear Rick,
I am Shravan, I am your neighbor, living next door. I am writing to invite you for a small party to celebrate my son birthday this Sunday at my residence. We would be honored if you could come along with your family.
My family have just moved into this place a week ago. We are pretty new to this area and this would be a perfect opportunity to make friends or acquaintances with other nearby residents.
Celebration starts at 6pm with light snacks and welcome drinks. After the cake cutting, there is be a special music program and magic show which is going to be a greater entertainment for children. Finally, the dinner will be served at 7pm. We have ordered variety of Indian, Chinese food from intercontinental restaurants. I will introduce you to all my friends and family and it will be great to know one another.
We would love if you can come at 6pm in the evening so we can spend lot of time together with family. If you decided not to come for any reason, please inform me so that I will ensure the noise will not disturb you much.
Looking forward to you see you this weekend.
Regards,
Shravan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 98, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...rinks. After the cake cutting, there is be a special music program and magic show ...
^^
Line 11, column 46, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng forward to you see you this weekend. Regards, Shravan
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54368932039 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53111469823 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626213592233 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8673884438 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8461538462 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.61538461538 4.34317383033 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164507367198 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552197450606 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510445751101 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956655671777 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567435795412 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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