Dear Mr John,
I am your new neighbour David who just moved to house next door your's recently. I am glad to stay in such beautiful vicinity.
Anyway, I am a tax consultant in a local firm and just relocated few days ago because of new job opportunity in the city. Previously, I was working for a finance company and rented a house in city center which bustled with traffic and pollution. However, to escape from all that, I considered this new career so that I can enjoy quaint atmosphere of this suburb. Nevertheless, I am writing this letter not just to introduce myself but also describe about my party plans for joining this new house and invite you and your family to join us.Although I am bit concerned about probable sound my party might cause for which I seek your pardon.
It's custom in my family, to host house warming ceremony and feast whenever we move to new house. Celebrations start with feast and drinks. Further, we are trying to have karoke music which will be fun for both adults and kids. Albeit, I assure the sound will not disturb you as it will be held as quiet as possible. Any suggestions from you to make the event merrier are whole heartedly welcome.
Ofcourse, the whole ceremony is incomplete without your presence and therefore please accept this letter as my invitation to the party. We are thinking to begin welcoming guests from 6PM but you can visit us anytime you want. Once again, I request your help and patience for making this entire event successful.
Thank you in advance for all your co-operation and look forward to meet you in the party.
Yours sincerely,
David.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 540, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Although
...d invite you and your family to join us.Although I am bit concerned about probable sound...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 554, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'bitten'.
Suggestion: bitten
...nd your family to join us.Although I am bit concerned about probable sound my party...
^^^
Line 11, column 65, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to meeting'.
Suggestion: to meeting
... all your co-operation and look forward to meet you in the party. Yours sincerely, ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 937.175257732 143% => OK
No of words: 286.0 206.0 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6958041958 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49808230033 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 127.690721649 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608391608392 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 290.88556701 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7970361056 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9375 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0625 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 7.41237113402 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36629110857 0.216113520407 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103623290723 0.0766984524023 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103518409986 0.0603063233224 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197985977678 0.12726935374 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631355987224 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 41.2886597938 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.