Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you about a recent article published by you in Trip Advisor magazine containded some false information.
I read the complete article throughout. Since you wrote regarding our culture and customs i found it quite interesting. I would like to express my gratitude for the same. However the information related to the climate of our city is incorrect.
You stated that maximum temperature reaches up to 45 degree c, which is not true. In fact, our city does not get hotter than 28 degree in summers.
It is important to portray the true picture of a town in travel magazines as false information can adversely affect the tourism industry. Moreover, fake information can negatively affect the reputation of our hometown.
I am humbly requesting you to correct the information and republish it in your future prints. In addition to this it would be great if you could add a footnote stating that the given information was false.
I am looking forward to a quick resolution to this important matter.
Yours faithfully,
Dean
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...wrote regarding our culture and customs i found it quite interesting. I would li...
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Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ms i found it quite interesting. I would like to express my gratitude for the sam...
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Line 5, column 173, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...e to express my gratitude for the same. However the information related to the climate ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, in addition, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 902.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01111111111 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87734874537 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655555555556 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.235868246 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.3846153846 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8461538462 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264636096798 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835330946418 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586917783853 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113232674607 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619189578639 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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