Dear James,
I hope you are doing well. I am your neighbor and I am writing to bring your attention towards the problem that I have been facing recently. The issue is that, I am not able to focus on my work because of the loud music coming from your apartment up till late night.
I have been residing in this building peacefully since three years but the problem arose after you moved into this building. I can understand that you have the right to enjoy the privacy of your flat but because of your frequent late night parties and loud music, I am not able to sleep properly at night. This is not only affecting my efficiency to work but indeed my health too.
Therefore, it is my humble request to you that you do parties only on weekends and do not play music after 11.00 pm. If you want to listen to music after that you can either hear it at low volume or you can also use head phone. This will allow me to sleep at night and to perform better at the office as well.
Seeking your kind co-operation.
Yours faithfully,
John
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 851.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34183673469 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19538984422 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566326530612 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4499997727 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3636363636 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8181818182 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274888499984 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105528381051 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.085582770828 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162529388756 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667366995834 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.33 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.