Dear Dan Le,
I am here to inform you about a problem that I have to face because of you on the daily bases. Actually, as you know that I have to get up early in the morning for my duty responsibilities. But the late night music shows that are held at your home, are making the trouble for me. These happened to be so loud. I have been facing this situation since last six months. I, however, tried to talk you on different occasions but I could not. So finally I have to write a letter to shed light on my problem. Hopefully, you will consider my suggestions.
Actually, I go to bed at 10:00 p.m. So, I would suggest you to arrange you music parties earlier or specifically restricting loud music until 10:00 p.m. Otherwise you may play music on low voice to not disturb neighbourhood. Additionally, you may consider another venue for music parties.
Hopefully, you will take my suggestions positively and will take appropriate action.
Thanks,
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...er another venue for music parties. Hopefully, you will take my suggestions ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, however, if, may, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 788.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63529411765 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81405272402 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652941176471 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8577663361 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.6363636364 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4545454545 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240114073897 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869018525837 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569595175146 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150856995965 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693570949015 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.