You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope.Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: explain why you are writing express concern ab

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing with reference to your letter dated 25-08-2019 asking for acknowledgement for receipt of a new bank card. However, the debit card which was supposed to be present in the envelope was missing. I am writing this letter to express my concern over the lost card and enquire about the future course of action.

I have received the above letter on 26th of August, to my dismay the letter was seal opened and there was no card and passcode inside the cover. I suspect that card must have been stolen. Hence to protect the misuse of it by strangers and cybercriminals, I immediately dialled your customer care to inform about the issue and to block my card.

Now I am totally bothered about this disappointing incident and it makes me rethink about the safeness of our valuables and confidential information in the hands of the banks and such irresponsible courier service providers.

Please let me know the next course of action that the bank is going to take in this regard. I hope my request for blocking of the card has been processed. Further, I request you to issue new debit card at the earliest possible.

Yours sincerely,
Akilan Palaniappan

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 81, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'sealed'.
Suggestion: sealed
... of August, to my dismay the letter was seal opened and there was no card and passco...
^^^^
Line 6, column 146, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... no card and passcode inside the cover. I suspect that card must have been stolen...
^
Line 6, column 189, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...uspect that card must have been stolen. Hence to protect the misuse of it by stranger...
^^^^^
Line 10, column 229, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ew debit card at the earliest possible. Yours sincerely, Akilan Palaniappan
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, may, with reference to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 988.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79611650485 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71355315462 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597087378641 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.694575499 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8181818182 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344032170156 0.216113520407 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115360644676 0.0766984524023 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688043427396 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180829076541 0.12726935374 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103583976845 0.0580467560999 178% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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