You have recently gone to live in a new city.
Write a letter to your English-speaking friend. In your letter,
you should explain why you have gone to live in the new city.
you should describe the place where you are living also invite your friend to come and see you.
Dear Anna,
It has been a long time since we did not see each other. I hope that you are doing well in this period. I am writing this letter to inform you that I have moved from Melbourne to Seattle recently.
There are two reasons that I decide to reside in Seattle. First of all, I have received a job offer from the Microsoft Corporation last month, and this company is headquartered in Seattle. Therefore, I must seize this marvellous opportunity to enhance my technical skills and earn a living from the new position. Besides, Seattle is arguably one of the comfortable city for people to li...
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Essay evaluation report
one of the comfortable city
one of the comfortable cities //one of nouns
Sentence: Therefore, I must seize this marvellous opportunity to enhance my technical skills and earn a living from the new position.
Error: marvellous Suggestion: marvelous
flaws:
No. of Words: 197 250
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 197 250
No. of Characters: 868 1200
No. of Different Words: 127 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.746 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.406 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.502 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 55 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 43 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 23 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 15 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.133 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.219 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.467 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.303 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.686 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.144 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, furthermore, if, look, so, therefore, well, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6345177665 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59560177985 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649746192893 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0686930727 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.2307692308 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1538461538 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210094560554 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065644138054 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624633187228 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124010549844 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616844880118 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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