You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter
1) explain why you have moved.
2) describe the new house.
3) Invite your friend to come and visit.
Dear Francis,
I hope you’re doing very well. I’ve finally shifted to a new house few days ago. As there was an insufficient living space in my house, so I decided to move. I told you about my living space, you know it was literally difficult for me to live in a small house. My both children are growing up, and living in a two bedrooms apartment was not easily. So I decided to replace my house and swiftly started reaching for new one.
Furthermore, let me tell you about my new house: it is bigger and it has a swimming pool. It has four bedrooms with a luxurious kitchen. Moreover, It has also three washrooms with an awesome TV lounge. How could I forget about a garden and separate car parking area? The garden is full of different kind of plants. There is a private car parking space inside my house, where I can park two to three cars simultaneously.
Anyway, why don’t you come and visit my new house? I’m sure you’re going to love it and I’ll be at home for next two weeks. New address and telephone number are mentioned here, give me a call anytime and do inform me before coming.
Hope to see you momentarily, give my sincere regards to uncle and aunt.
Lots of love,
EK
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, finally, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, kind of, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1012.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53811659193 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56080904538 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618834080717 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.1621335171 44.8134815571 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.5294117647 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1176470588 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52941176471 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16028826163 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527134127061 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567642334877 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0949633757332 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247000064921 0.0580467560999 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.16 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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