Dear James,
I hope this letter finds you in good spirits. At first, I would like to apologize for not attending your calls as I was busy shifting to my new house. I am writing this letter to let you know about my new living place.
It is known to that I was not at all happy with my previous house. As it was on the first floor of the apartment, it was a little insecure to reside and there was much scope for the miscreants for theft. Apart from that, there was a lot of amendments that need to be addressed inside the house. However, my complaints to the issues went unanswered by the landlord, forming to make a strong decision to move from that place.
At last, I feel a bit relaxed when now as I have moved to a new house. It is very secure and comfortable. It is a typical residential place and people are concerned about the about making a crowd. The new house is under surveillance of security camera. Its a huge house laying in a half acre. It has 4 bedrooms with 3 attached bathrooms and one separate bathroom. It has a big modern open kitchen and pantry. dining room beside living area and notable green garden. It a balcony with a beautiful view.
I request to mark your calendar to visit my new house next Sunday along with your family. I hope we can have fun sometimes.
Looking forward to seeing you on Sunday at my house.
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 255, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...under surveillance of security camera. Its a huge house laying in a half acre. It ...
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Line 7, column 411, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Dining
...s a big modern open kitchen and pantry. dining room beside living area and notable gre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, so, apart from, i feel, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1107.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 256.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32421875 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40231199166 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5859375 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 351.0 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4032052072 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.2631578947 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4736842105 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05263157895 4.34317383033 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208829400404 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557235207668 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579986746709 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121336566694 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582824575023 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 8.37731958763 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.18 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.