Dear Jain,
Hello! how are you? Long time since I have heard from you. Hope you are doing well. How are things at your end. Hope you are comfortable with your new job. I am so glad to tell you that after a long wait and constant search, I finally found my dream home. As you know that my previous residence was located in a noisy and busy locality. Furthermore my house was small and no sufficient space to accommodate my guests. Now I finally managed to move to an independent villa.
My new house is located in Bills Road right next to the Children's Park. It is a two storey building with a spacious car parking area, a beautiful garden and a private pool. The house has all facilities including two master bedroom, a spacious kitchen and a living room.My neighbourhood is a family community area with all the basic amenities. All the families living here are so friendly and co-operative with each other. It's a quiet and a peaceful place little away from the hustle bustle town. We have buses and trams very often from Bills Road and hence is easy to travel for work and to go to the town.
I just shifted to my new home last Sunday, so there are a few household chores left to finish. I am free on Thursday and was wondering if you would like to visit my new home and spend some time together.
Looking forward for your reply.
Regards
Alice
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: How
Dear Jain, Hello! how are you? Long time since I have heard f...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...s located in a noisy and busy locality. Furthermore my house was small and no sufficient sp...
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Line 5, column 78, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... right next to the Childrens Park. It is a two storey building with a spacious ca...
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Line 5, column 271, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: My
...m, a spacious kitchen and a living room.My neighbourhood is a family community are...
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Line 5, column 424, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...endly and co-operative with each other. Its a quiet and a peaceful place little awa...
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Line 13, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ward for your reply. Regards Alice
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, hence, if, look, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1122.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 251.0 206.0 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47011952191 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37896983341 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617529880478 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8896926467 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.3333333333 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9444444444 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198773583204 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603941391391 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470325547322 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10600221263 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623131776314 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.05 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.