You have recently started work in a new company.
• explain why you changed jobs
• describe your new job
• tell him/her your other news
Dear Niket,
Eager to tell you about my new job! I am damn sure you would enjoy it.
You must feel awkward about such frequent jumps. However, I was not satisfied with my first job and salary were too low as compared to experience. Also, work-environment was not delightful. I was aiming for a combination of smart and innovative work which I certainly got here at a new job.
My new job is a utopia. Also, the salary hike is more than double. Of course, roles and responsibility given are more serious and have a large influence on other employees, but I like hectic schedule and loads of work with numerous meetings every day. Are you planning for any job change in the near future?
There is one more important news about my sister's wedding. Of course, you are invited and requested to come early at least before a week. Official invitation will be reached to you soon via email or message.
I hope you and your family are also well and enjoying a healthy life!
Jimmy
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, well, at least, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 809.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57062146893 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56434946034 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.683615819209 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5997516624 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.2307692308 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6153846154 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320486108192 0.216113520407 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102664773099 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756685389685 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171721541149 0.12726935374 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604240967493 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.63 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.