You have recently used a moving company to move your household items to a new place and they have been damaged in transfer. Write a letter to the company’s manager and say
– When and where did it take place?
– What is your complaint?
– Suggest a reasonable solution.
Dear Sir / Madam
I am writing this letter to complain about the damage to my household items that have been transferred by your company last week.My name is Engy Saeed and I requested a vehicle to move my stuff from Nuyiemieya Ajman to Silicon Oasis Dubai on 18th April at 10:00 am. The items were two large cartoon boxes.Unfortunately, when I opened the packages, I was stricken to see all the items inside were broken and damaged. It was obvious, how they were awfully and carelessly handled.
As a known moving company with your reputation, I really relied on you to deliver them safely and cautiously moreover, I informed the company's customer service to be cautious as they are fragile.
I am frustrated and exasperated about it, especially that they are rare and might not be able to find them again.
I had paid extra for insurance and you should give me a good compensate for my loss. I have attached a detailed price list with all items were included in the package.I am sure you will tackle this situation and pay me a reasonable but satisfactory compensation.I am waiting for your reply as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
Engy Saeed
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir / Madam I am writing this let...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: My
...n transferred by your company last week.My name is Engy Saeed and I requested a ve...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Unfortunately
... The items were two large cartoon boxes.Unfortunately, when I opened the packages, I was stri...
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Line 7, column 87, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... give me a good compensate for my loss. I have attached a detailed price list wit...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... all items were included in the package.I am sure you will tackle this situation ...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... all items were included in the package.I am sure you will tackle this situation ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...easonable but satisfactory compensation.I am waiting for your reply as soon as po...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...easonable but satisfactory compensation.I am waiting for your reply as soon as po...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng for your reply as soon as possible. Yours faithfully, Engy Saeed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 959.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77114427861 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85523423093 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.561230833 44.8134815571 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.875 76.5299724578 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.125 16.8248392259 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238362237516 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861544980862 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692755007946 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0967351134853 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0820927699342 0.0580467560999 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 8.37731958763 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.