Dear sir/madam,
I am writing this letter to you regarding advertisement which I came across last Sunday,I am Smith, I think this job position opt for me which are being offered by you. I really would like to work for you because I think it would provide good experience for and me and I would like to travel and know about different culture of your country as well as meet new people which can broaden my horizons. Nowadays, I have been working as a child care taker with a family for two years, so that, I think it offers me a great experience which makes me perfect for you opportunity; However, leisure time can be utilized with constructed way with this six year old child and he enhance my stamina, patient, reliable and hard working. Therefore, looking after child is rewarded with many ways, On top of that, currently, I have completed my first aid care course.
If you choose me it would provide chance to see Australia and travel will new places when I will free and makes new friend in order to escalate me communication skills .
Thanks you for taking time to read my letter.Please feel free to contact me if you need further detail and recommendations.
Yours faithfully,
azx
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- Nowadays plastic money replacements such as credit and debit cards are extremely popular even more than banknotes and coins Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this Include your personal opinion and examples based on your own experience 89
- In the past knowledge was contained in books Nowadays knowledge is uploaded to the internet Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 84
- Planting trees is very important for the environment Some people say trees should be planted in the vacant areas of cities and towns while other says housing facilities should be built instead Do you agree or disagree 84
- The percentage of people using various mobile phone features 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...tisement which I came across last Sunday,I am Smith, I think this job position opt...
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Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... am Smith, I think this job position opt for me which are being offered by you. I...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oaden my horizons. Nowadays, I have been working as a child care taker with a fa...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...en working as a child care taker with a family for two years, so that, I think i...
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Line 3, column 672, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'enhances'.
Suggestion: enhances
...way with this six year old child and he enhance my stamina, patient, reliable and hard ...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...rder to escalate me communication skills . Thanks you for taking time to read m...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Please
...s you for taking time to read my letter.Please feel free to contact me if you need fur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, really, regarding, so, therefore, well, i think, as well as, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 990.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66981132075 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67521607762 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632075471698 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 16.3608247423 183% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.8435529559 44.8134815571 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.428571429 76.5299724578 185% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2857142857 16.8248392259 180% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.4285714286 4.34317383033 332% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318866573452 0.216113520407 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13739402854 0.0766984524023 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640609685971 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189676875456 0.12726935374 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0969728150084 0.0580467560999 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 8.37731958763 187% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 7.45979381443 169% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.4 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 8.62886597938 197% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 8.54432989691 164% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 8.15463917526 208% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.