Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to let you know that I have recently gone through your article posted in an Australian magazine; and found it interesting as I love children. I am currently looking for a job and would like to apply for the position.
Let me give you my background. Do you know Presidency college of Hospitality Management? I have completed my bachelor degree in Hospitality Management from the same college recently. I want to complete my master degree also before joining a fulltime job. Due to some financial limitations, I am not able to get an admission this year.
This job will enable me to earn some grant and save for my college fees. In the mean time, while I am in Australia, I would like to start my higher studies preparation well in advance to get a scholarship while enrolling for the course.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Chiranjit
- You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six- year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter - Explain why you would like the job - give deta 73
- The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing.Do you agree or disagree? 73
- Some people think it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 67
- You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six- year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter - Explain why you would like the job - give deta 73
- Some people think it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, well, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.48453608247 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 751.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8141025641 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93846461494 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634615384615 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0942434762 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.2727272727 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1818181818 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241319780005 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946284839362 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654650352705 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167202711704 0.12726935374 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721690858517 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.