Dear Sir,
I am writing you this letter in response to the advertisement in the newspaper. The advertisement number mentioned was XYZ223 regarding requirement of teacher for the local community college. I am very keen to apply for the same as I think I perfectly suit for this role.
I would like to teach gymnastics to the students. I specialize in hip hop and contemporary. The course would include one hour classes of basic dance steps which will progress eventually. Nowadays, more and more students are benefiting from choosing their career in sports and athletics. Students can benefit from it by keeping themselves fit and participating in the events will boost their confidence.
I have been a national champion in Gymnastics and retired recently. I am well versed with the modern techniques. Moreover, I am an expert in mixing hip hop with the contemporary which is highly appreciated these days. Also, I am a mother of four and can tackle a large group of children smoothly.
I hope to receive a positive reply from you side.
Yours Sincerely,
Jane Doe
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 51, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ke to teach gymnastics to the students. I specialize in hip hop and contemporary....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, moreover, regarding, so, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 900.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97144849742 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655555555556 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.9306721899 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.2857142857 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8571428571 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219328251718 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580979051001 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663838269884 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114291959932 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0975589679464 0.0580467560999 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.83 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.