You live in a room in college which you share with another student. however, there are many problems with this agreement and you find it very difficult to study. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. I your letter:
1) describe the situation
2) explain your problem and why it is difficult to work.
3) say what kind of accommodation you would like to prefer.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to explain the inconvenience I am facing in my current accommodation and want you to move me into another room, probably a single room.
I am currently residing at room number A12, second floor of Westley hostel. It is a double sharing room with another student. Although room is pretty well with all the amenities available but I find it troublesome to study here. As I am pursuing masters in computers. So, I have to work on my assignments on daily basis which need continuous focus and concentration. But due to my roommate's inconsiderate behavior, It is too hard for me to study in my room. He usually have his friends visiting him until late in the evening and they have tendency to listen to loud music which hinder my study.
Moreover, my roommate has a tendency to use my personal belongings without my permission, which make me feel insecure in my own room. In addition to that, I found my wrist watch missing yesterday and I was not sure to whom I should blame.
I hope you will understand my concern for studies because of irrational behavior of my roommate and I shall be highly obliged to you If you would arrange a single room for me and let me allow to move there as soon as possible, probably this week as my exams are approaching.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Ell Green
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 230, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ut I find it troublesome to study here. As I am pursuing masters in computers. So,...
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Line 5, column 470, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
... for me to study in my room. He usually have his friends visiting him until late in ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 48, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'belongings'.
Suggestion: belongings
...r, my roommate has a tendency to use my personal belongings without my permission, which make me fe...
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Line 9, column 193, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'moving'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: moving
...e a single room for me and let me allow to move there as soon as possible, probably thi...
^^^^^^^
Line 14, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ou soon. Yours faithfully, Ell Green
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, second, so, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1130.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 246.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59349593496 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75511410134 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626016260163 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 290.88556701 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.1114968135 44.8134815571 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9230769231 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9230769231 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186286725481 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737058729846 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072799614019 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111853752927 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047542176977 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.