I am writing to complain about my current accommodation, which is room number 607 in 3rd Block-A building.
My name is Anshu Bhardwaj, 3rd-year B.Tech student, Maharaja University, got transferred in this sharing room three months before. Currently, I am sharing the room with another student named Rakesh. However, I am keen to leave this room at the earliest.
The reason for changing the accommodation is the consistent visit to my roommate's friends. Rakesh's friends frequently come to our room for group studies and parties. It's become difficult to focus on studies in mid of such chaos. As an outcome of it, I could score fewer marks in the last half-yearly exam. I have apprised about the problem to my roommate a hundred times, but all fell into the deaf ears.
Therefore, I request you to assign me a new non-sharing room on the ground floor with attached bathroom.
Hopefully, you understand the gravity of the situation and will take suitable action accordingly.
Thanks for your consideration and support.
Yours Faithfully,
Anshu Bhardwaj
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m number 607 in 3rd Block-A building. My name is Anshu Bhardwaj, 3rd-year B.Te...
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Line 5, column 39, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Tech
... My name is Anshu Bhardwaj, 3rd-year B.Tech student, Maharaja University, got trans...
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Line 18, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Yours Faithfully, Anshu Bhardwaj
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, however, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 917.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8782874727 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.708571428571 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4874904307 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.5384615385 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4615384615 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38461538462 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214539585089 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656894235596 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751449918051 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931052149259 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845050606501 0.0580467560999 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.52 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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