Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to complain about your bank's poor services. The particular problem I am focusing on here is regarding your staff communication and dispatch services of your bank.
I had ordered a new cheque book from Punjab National Bank on 23rd July 2021 by filling up the online application form available on your bank mobile app. I also receive an assurance email regarding my new cheque book request. As per the assurance mail, It would take only five working days to complete my request. However, It's almost two weeks, and yet I still not have received any update on my order.
Therefore, I called your complaint number department and spoke to one of your customer representatives, they did not help to give me the rightful information about your request and disconnected the call. I am so annoyed with this kind of service and I felt terrible about such kind of actions with your bank workers.
As a request of such consequences, I had to write a letter to you directly to look into this matter and take it into priority as I am a businessman and this is a business account. I have to pay some of my staff by cheque rather than NEFT transactions. Please look into this issue and update me with the best time and day I will get my chequebook.
I am looking forward to hearing a prompt and positive response from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 323, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...g days to complete my request. However, Its almost two weeks, and yet I still not h...
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Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Yours sincerely, Shwatank Bhasin
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, regarding, so, still, therefore, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1162.0 937.175257732 124% => OK
No of words: 247.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7044534413 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71645739567 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595141700405 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6549964213 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3846153846 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249500710391 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830064248662 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04830248111 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124722284808 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415042278501 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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