Dear Sir,
I am your Tax Attorney David and writing this letter to share my experience about recent conference that I attended on your behest. I must say that it's an honour for me to attend ' Goods and Service Rebate' session organised National Chamber of Commerce. The programe was not only insightful but also inspired me to organise a presentation , with your permission, for our team-mates.
I am planning to start the seminar with Introductory chapter, for brief catch-up of the subject, and continue with power-point module where I discuss about recent changes in form of bullet points. Further, there will be interactive phase where participants will ask few questions and experts share their perspective. Finally, event will be concluded with work-shop and delegates speech.
Though topic itself is potential of covering wide range of issues, I tailored the symposium to meet the purpose of our company. Therefore, to keep it precise, I included landmark enactments in Taxations and Supreme Court decisions. As a result, our staff will have comprehensive understanding of how their work will benefit our clients.
Although, seminar helps accountants to gain experience it would be better if we include even legal department as well. Certainly, senior managers and interns can also attend the conference, if they are convenient to attend. Our meeting hall will be ideal to schedule the seminar but depending upon number of invitees we can book an auditorium.
Hope my request will get assent and look forward for your response.
Your's sincerely,
David.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, look, so, therefore, well, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 937.175257732 142% => OK
No of words: 250.0 206.0 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.328 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87379440922 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 127.690721649 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.688 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 290.88556701 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1776192585 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1428571429 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175860482986 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575420490514 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697487782158 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0859830253404 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845163198301 0.0580467560999 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 8.37731958763 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 8.71597938144 153% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 7.59969072165 130% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 41.2886597938 206% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.