Dear Mrs. Katherine!
I am Victoria, the moderator of the Panda company. I attended the meeting about exporting goods which took place in your hotel at 7 p.m yesterday. Unfortunately, I have left some important papers regarding the contract the company is about to sign next month. So, you know, it is very important and I really want to get it back.
The book cover is blue. There is a bold text, which is in the middle of the cover that says "trading and manufacturing". Below it, there is the name of me, which is Victoria C. Anderson and the name of our CEO, Jenifer L. Walker. I think I left it under the table in the meeting room. It's table number 8.
I am looking forward to getting it back. I hope you could find them for me. Thanks in advance!
Moderator
Victoria Anderson
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, regarding, so, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 655.0 937.175257732 70% => OK
No of words: 145.0 206.0 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51724137931 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79609035694 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 127.690721649 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634482758621 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 199.8 290.88556701 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7817122365 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 50.3846153846 76.5299724578 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.1538461538 16.8248392259 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84615384615 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20379759523 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496440208174 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666938101353 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0653808600777 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0901335263492 0.0580467560999 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.4 8.37731958763 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.75 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.58 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.