You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter
- say where you think you left the papers
- explain why they are so important
- tell the manager what you want him/her to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to bring it to your notice that I have attended the Tech Symposium organized at your hotel yesterday and I believe that I have left behind some private documents at the venue. While I don’t remember the exact password I changed my locker code to, I am confident that they would be available in the locker provided for Table 6 occupants.
Let me explain you why these papers are valuable to me. I have recently purchased a house and applied a bank loan for the same. As the documents I left include my tax returns, and bank statements that are highly confidential, I wouldn’t want them to land into unsafe hands.
Would you kindly help by retaining the locker untouched until tomorrow? I can assure you that I will be able to show up early morning tomorrow and collect them with the support of your maintenance staff. Although this request might sound unusual, I really hope you understand the significance of this favor.
Thank you for your consideration
Yours faithfully,
Shyam
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80898876404 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6715122411 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.679775280899 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6464384572 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1111111111 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288926201583 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105259272421 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694741815821 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166235580248 0.12726935374 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347313131184 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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