You recently bought a piece of equipment for you kitchen but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken.
Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter:
describe the problem with the equipment.
explain what happened when you phoned the shop.
say what you would like the manager to do.
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Mohammed Aslam. I am writing to you regarding the technical problem of the grinder which I bought from your department store.
Firstly, the grinder is not working properly in full load. Actually as the grinder's technical specification, it can run in full rpm speed with 5kg of grinding material. But the motor in the grinder is not rotating in maximum target force with 4kg of rice.
Once, I found this technical issue, I phoned to your shop as a first time but nobody picked the call. I called second time, the sales representative named Mr.DDD is received my call and did not respond well and not grasping my request as well.
So I kindly request you to exchange the grinder with the new equipment or refund my money as soon as possible.
I look forward to hearing from you the best offer and request to not to create any inconvenience to the customer.
Yours faithfully,
N. Mohammed Aslam
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'look', 'regarding', 'second', 'so', 'well']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.245901639344 0.220444632235 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.147540983607 0.167888034529 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0601092896175 0.0606518309736 99% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0928961748634 0.0506257000042 183% => Less adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0874316939891 0.118615021944 74% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0819672131148 0.107062808482 77% => OK
Participles: 0.0491803278689 0.041066498444 120% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.74405320558 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0382513661202 0.0385302599488 99% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0819672131148 0.0714148451538 115% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00546448087432 0.0191574576366 29% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00546448087432 0.00930345855455 59% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 936.0 1141.60824742 82% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.134020619 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74233128834 5.53046319177 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78085437643 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.325153374233 0.284621296913 114% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.239263803681 0.211203875043 113% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.153374233129 0.133321485273 115% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0920245398773 0.0843313296314 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74405320558 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631901840491 0.622163163488 102% => OK
Word variations: 59.0355094201 62.8969750728 94% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 12.9587628866 77% => OK
Sentence length: 16.3 16.4300151701 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.555183919 44.7399317507 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6 90.9928171075 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 16.4300151701 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.613754768223 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.09278350515 0% => OK
Readability: 40.2263803681 37.5504026743 107% => OK
Elegance: 1.15 1.13073093955 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.408459429152 0.331212695627 123% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.114400098459 0.0927372745006 123% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0762312368006 0.0736520305886 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.722205413006 0.579516596996 125% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.19764171669 0.180689518051 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165728855989 0.122183219658 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106362805054 0.0765303033291 139% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.199289867554 0.211926503985 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0308959761908 0.0737400523855 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241758606981 0.203819188451 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313904043631 0.067151250289 47% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.45360824742 54% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.48453608247 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.0206185567 99% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 4.73195876289 42% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 1.03092783505 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.56701030928 117% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 8.32989690722 84% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.