You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school asked for your feedback on this course.Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter. describe what you enjoyed about the course.. say how much cooking you've d

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You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school asked for your feedback on this course.

Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter

. describe what you enjoyed about the course.

. say how much cooking you've done since the course

. suggest another cookery course you'd like school to offer.

Dear Sir Brown

I’m writing to inform you about my last experience in your cookery school. I have been cooking almost five years, moreover it’s occupation. However, in your school I taste a different part from kitchen. The tutors which in the school, the kitchen equipment for us was a perfect. I felt like a young and happiest chef in the world when I was learning the bakery lesson. Therefore I want to say you and yours tutor’s are amazing.

When I back to from course, cooking something is becoming inevitable pleasure for me. Thus since four day, I remain cook all day in my unprofessional kitchen. Moreover, I be able to join more lecture as a Demi chef if it is convenient for you. And also, I have recommendation for your course. Last month I attempted to course in Vienna. It was a different and enjoyable. You must check this course. It’s consist of agricultural food. Maybe You can improve your kitchen with this idea.

I’m waiting your answer.

your sincerely.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91860465116 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77824255471 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662790697674 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.910444215 44.8134815571 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 52.875 76.5299724578 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.75 16.8248392259 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3125 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320629186115 0.216113520407 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096379303199 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081253233912 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185526363112 0.12726935374 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08198842934 0.0580467560999 141% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.79 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.07 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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