Dear Zen,
It was a such a great experience for me to meet you in the Cabana Club last week. Your mail regarding the job offer is also a pleasant surprise for me. Thank you for considering me for the position of the Senior Manager in your company - ABC international. However, after careful deliberation, I decided to decline this offer.
As I mentioned in our discussions last week, I am working for the MI international and have a handsome pay over there. The fact of not accepting your offer is that my company decided to promote me on an HR position which is very great opportunity for me. So, I do not want to let it go.
However, I would like to recommend my friend, Reena as a strong potential candidate. She has expertise in sales skill and now looking for high-paid jobs. I think this offer is perfect match for her. I would like to share her contact information is 344 xxx xxx.
I want to say thank you once again to offer me a job in your firm. I apologized for give any kind of inconvenience.
Yours sincerely,
Erin.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Zen, It was a such a great experience for me ...
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Line 4, column 253, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: xxx
...to share her contact information is 344 xxx xxx. I want to say thank you once again to...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...er contact information is 344 xxx xxx. I want to say thank you once again to off...
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Line 5, column 67, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e again to offer me a job in your firm. I apologized for give any kind of inconve...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, regarding, so, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 844.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41884816754 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76008252695 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628272251309 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8512725898 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.2857142857 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6428571429 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215319450205 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730722408389 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824398338566 0.0603063233224 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139868920671 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0945582457732 0.0580467560999 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.76 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.