You recently read an article in a newspaper about your childhood friend with whom you have lost contact for a long time Write a letter to the editor In your letter Say which edition and when did the article appear Explain why you lost contact with your fr

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You recently read an article in a newspaper about your childhood friend with whom you have lost contact for a long time. Write a letter to the editor. In your letter:

Say which edition and when did the article appear
Explain why you lost contact with your friend
Say how you want them to help you to get back in touch

Dear Sir/Madam,

Myself Rinki Gupta, writing this letter regarding an article published in the newspaper "The Tribune" yesterday dated 12-12-2018 under Technology Section. The article titled "New businesswoman creating Indian Economy in Technology" was about an entrepreneur Ms. Nidhi, that included a face-to-face interview session.

I would like to tell you that she is my childhood friend, we were together from school till our graduating from the Panjab University, Chandigarh. But due to my father's transfer in another state, the contact was lost and we could not get another chance to unite. Fortunately, having viewed that article I came to know that she has been such a successful business person and that she has received an award from our honourable prime minister "Mr. Narendra Modi".

I am feeling overwhelmed after watching her picture in the newspaper and want to meet her again to recollect our old memories. It would be really appreciable if you provide me her contact information or her email id. Or if this is against the rules, kindly provide her my details so that she can contact me. Else you can also arrange our meeting in your office, if possible.
I look forward for a positive reply from your side.

Yours sincerely,
Rinki Gupta

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, regarding, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1093.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28019323671 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93325440819 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690821256039 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3508650246 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3636363636 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8181818182 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214114964513 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769984834621 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345655493213 0.0603063233224 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106257980048 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00566860232094 0.0580467560999 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 8.37731958763 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 8.71597938144 153% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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