Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Rajan Mishra, recently migrated to Ontario, Canada and I am writing to inform you about the damages caused to my furniture which was shifted from Dubai before 2 months. Regretful to say that the service provided by your company was disastrous and late for more than 1 month. As you know, I handed over the complete package on 01/12/2022 and you promised to deliver on or before 31/01/2023 but you had done it on yesterday. Although, I specifically mentioned about the care needs to be taken by the carrier and marked “Handle with Care”. Besides, you had charged insurance fess of 30% of shipment cost for the safety. Unfortunately, my heart was broken when I opened the package, I found that the four legs have broken completely. In addition to that, I have an emotional attachment with this furniture because it was gifted by my mother. Perhaps, I need an immediate action from your side to repair as earliest as possible and you could have the option to compensate against the insurance.
And, I hope you understand my feelings and do needful.
Thankfully,
Rajan Mishra
Canada
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 933.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88481675393 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7308972794 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659685863874 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7231888652 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239388295984 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764111177796 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508190600658 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151805573664 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0967309197651 0.0580467560999 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 933.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88481675393 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7308972794 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659685863874 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7231888652 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239388295984 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764111177796 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508190600658 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151805573664 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0967309197651 0.0580467560999 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.