You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter:
say why he/she would not enjoy going to college
explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her
suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Dear Sam,
Hello! How are you? I hope this letter finds you in the pink of your health. yesterday I received your letter in which you are seeking advice on whether to join a college or get a job. I would recommend you to try to get a job because if you take my example it's very difficult for me now to study and earn together.
As you know I'm doing a part-time job with my study and it's getting hard for me to focus on study. Moreover, I am getting very tired after my job and sometimes I missed the lectures. Your mom told me yesterday that your health is not good while considering your health I will recommend you to find a job and earn money so that you can be financially independent.
Here, I'd like to suggest some jobs for you which you can find very comfortable that is HR management, Clerical, Data Entry Operator, Supervisor. It'll be beneficial for you if you choose any one job which I suggested to you.
I hope my advice will help you.
Yours Truly
ABC
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 78, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yesterday
...r finds you in the pink of your health. yesterday I received your letter in which you are...
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Line 5, column 317, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... for me now to study and earn together. As you know Im doing a part-time job wit...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 13, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...and earn together. As you know Im doing a part-time job with my study and...
^^
Line 9, column 363, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hat you can be financially independent. Here, Id like to suggest some jobs for y...
^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 7, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...e financially independent. Here, Id like to suggest some jobs for you which...
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Line 13, column 225, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e any one job which I suggested to you. I hope my advice will help you. Yo...
^^^^^^^
Line 21, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... advice will help you. Yours Truly ABC
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 808.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36756756757 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44769983407 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4542896122 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.4545454545 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8181818182 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31643036672 0.216113520407 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141480995403 0.0766984524023 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841485978396 0.0603063233224 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202935046778 0.12726935374 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106776450382 0.0580467560999 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.