You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
Dear Chris,
I feel very happy to receive a letter from you after a long time and glad that you seek my suggestion about continuing your education or taking up an employment. Well, I would say that each option has it’s own pros and cons. However, I suggest you why, it is advantageous to start your professional career early.
Let me explain you in more detail. Having a job will give you a sense of being independent and secured. You can gain invaluable work experience and will give you an opportunity to progress in your career faster. Moreover, most organizations encourage their employees to take up part-time study so, you can check with the prospective employers regarding this option.
Finally, considering the current financial situation of your family, I strongly suggest you to try to find a job as soon as possible to support your parents. Hope you will consider my suggestion and let me know if you need a reference letter which will help you to secure a job. Hope to hearing from you soon with a good news.
Your Friend
Samuel
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 315, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'good news'.
Suggestion: good news
...job. Hope to hearing from you soon with a good news. Your Friend Samuel
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 881.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81420765027 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72296787213 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655737704918 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.368558998 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0909090909 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6363636364 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 4.34317383033 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24910159736 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990051573742 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548635907466 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174778805406 0.12726935374 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340968465099 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.