Dear Jan,
I am super glad to know that you have passed your bachelor degree with first class. Well, You had asked me to give an advice about two options we have, as per my understand and seeing the market trend, I would like to suggest you that you must go for a job instead of further study.
Since your financial condition is not well enough to bear the higher education expenditures, it would be good for you to search an job.
As you have done a degree in Electric engineering, and there are plethora electric industries nearby your hometown. I would suggest you make a profile on a leading job searching website like Monster.com, Naukari.com, and you can opt for the paid service provided by them. Therefore, they will make a proper resume for you, and you will get an update from them if any job opening matches your resume come into their job data bank.
One more point I would like to mention that please choose the job as per your academic record, else it will be difficult to change a job if you have work experience different from your education history.
Hope my suggestion will help you. I wish you all the best for your future.
And you can contact me any time if you need any help.
With Regards,
Satpreet Singh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
Dear Jan , I am super glad to know that you have ...
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Line 2, column 116, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'advice'.
Suggestion: advice
...t class. Well, You had asked me to give an advice about two options we have, as per my un...
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Line 3, column 129, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...res, it would be good for you to search an job. As you have done degree in Electr...
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Line 4, column 92, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...d there are plethora electric industies near by your hometown. I would suggest you to m...
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Line 4, column 403, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'their'?
Suggestion: the; their
...b opening matches your resume come into the their job data bank. One more point I would ...
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Line 6, column 25, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...ation history. Hope my suggestion will helps you. I wish you all the best for your f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1012.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51785714286 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34447709298 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.4994456738 44.8134815571 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3636363636 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301213059314 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116661947549 0.0766984524023 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07263163714 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160495246563 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543219271802 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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