Dear Sushi,
I hope you are doing well!
I am extremely sorry I did not write to you earlier as I have been very busy with my work. It is an extreme joy to hear that you have got an opportunity to go to college. If you would like to know my opinion in this regard, I advise that you join job and not college.
You recently got married and if you join a college at this time it might cause some financial problems as you need to pay academics fee. However, if you work in a firm it can help you serve your family better.
I remember you telling me that you got an opportunity from a large firm that deals in interior decoration. Since, you have 5 years of experience in interior decoration, I suggest you grab this opportunity. I know that you have a very creative mind to be utilised for interior decoration.
Hope to see you soon.
All the best!
Jyoti
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 708.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.29090909091 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44089733458 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9083104345 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.1 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205377957703 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931977708099 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424553475801 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120369517708 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370242147142 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.31 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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