You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
• say why he/she would not enjoy going to college
• explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her
• suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Dear Samuel,
I am glad you finally decided to come to New Zealand. Now, about the visa whether you should opt for a job and migrate as immigrant or attend a college and travel as a student. I would suggest the former.
I sincerely believe the college will be less appealing to you as you have mastered all the complex topics that will be covered in the college. Moreover, I think you would qualify as a teacher any day.
However, you would undoubtedly benefit by applying for a job. As you have acquired 5 years of work experience as software developer, it will be a significant liability for any company.
You could apply for a senior post in software development, which are very much in demand in the current job market. Furthermore, you could consider becoming a teacher and impart your knowledge and experience.
I am keenly interested to know your decision and look forward to seeing you soon.
Your friend
Greens
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Samuel, I am glad you finally decided to come to...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 26.3917525773 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 780.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81481481481 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67040775531 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3651443047 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.9090909091 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7272727273 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242902729733 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097016566619 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512619350412 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123846688527 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417797078971 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.