You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter:
give details of what went wrong
explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time
say what action you would like the manager to take
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my complaint with stay at your hotel in UK.My name is Chris Williams and I stayed in your hotel from 10th March-13th March to attend a conference.During my stay,I had an issue with a faulty air conditioner.Climate was moist and hot during that time so was expecting that ac will give a great relief.
To my surprise,when I switched on AC;instead of cooling,it was throwing hot air.I informed the staff at reception about the same.They said they will tell a concern person and meanwhile I have to bear with the situation.When I said instead I want to change the room,they didn't approve my request.
This was totally shock for me.I find it highly unacceptable.Rooms AC should have proper air conditioners and in case there is some issue,it should be addressed immediately.I would like the payment for my stay to be refunded and assurance that such kind of inconvenience doesn't happen to anyone else in future.
I look forward to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Chris Williams
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...hear from you soon. Yours sincerely, Chris Williams
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, while, as to, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92045454545 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19582953962 2.54303337028 126% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.676136363636 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 16.3608247423 214% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 140.447285485 44.8134815571 313% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 173.2 76.5299724578 226% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 35.2 16.8248392259 209% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.2 4.34317383033 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 2.54639175258 785% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176554185067 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786196519244 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791982306864 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893182962121 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0887654869897 0.0580467560999 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 8.37731958763 230% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.87 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 7.45979381443 196% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 8.62886597938 319% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.0 8.54432989691 187% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.