You recently took a long vacation. In your absence, a friend did you a huge favor.
Write a letter thanking your friend. In your letter:
Explain what the favor was
Describe how this favor helped you
Offer compensation
Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ___
Dear Yaman,
I hope you're doing well. I just wanted to thank you very much for taking care of my pets during my vacation. I really didn't even expect you to allocate such a huge time to do so.
As you may know, pets are not allowed to travel in any of Syrian aircraft due to security reasons, hence, I was seeking for companies to look after my pets during my long holiday, and all of them were far too expensive. Therefore, your great action saved me a lot of money and even effort.
Thus, I was wondering if you please accept a small compensation regarding your amazing job during my absence, will be extremely appreciated as I know how much it was difficult.
Once again, I extremely thankful for your great effort and I'm so sorry for any inconvenient that this issue made for you, looking to see you soon.
All the best,
Bilal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 8, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
Dear Yaman, I hope youre doing well. I just wanted to thank you ...
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Line 5, column 110, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ing care of my pets during my vacation. I really didnt even expect you to allocat...
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Line 5, column 112, Rule ID: PRP_RB_NO_VB[1]
Message: Are you missing a verb?
...g care of my pets during my vacation. I really didnt even expect you to allocate such a huge...
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Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...of my pets during my vacation. I really didnt even expect you to allocate such a huge...
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Line 17, column 60, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...mely thankful for your great effort and Im so sorry for any inconvenient that this...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, may, really, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 703.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53548387097 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38796845462 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.703225806452 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.109523113 44.8134815571 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.875 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 4.34317383033 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206263365405 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089497052708 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459908962133 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135136165647 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421908970581 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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