Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to you with regards to some problems I have been having recently that have made it difficult for me to concentrate on my work here.
I am a student, currently pursuing Hotel Management course from D.M.A university but the tuition fee is quite high. Thus, I decided to do a part time job in your company so that I can pay my fee. I am working in the Cafeteria since two months but from past couple of weeks I have observed that the quality of the food is deteriorating incessantly.
It is simply because of the new chef Arjun as he is not maintaining the set standards of hygiene. Also, he is using loads of spices and oil to the food which is not at all good for health. Hence, many people are complaining about it to me and the sale has also decreased to a great extent. Although, we all tried to make him comprehend this issue but he did not improve.
Conspicuously, I would like to advice you to issue a warning letter against him stating that strict actions will be taken against him if he does not make needed ammendments.
I am hoping for a prompt action on this serious matter.
Yours faithfully,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 69, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...rsuing Hotel Management course from D.M.A university but the tuition fee is quite...
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Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... is quite high. Thus, I decided to do a part time job in your company so that I can pay m...
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Line 5, column 372, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hend this issue but he did not improve. Conspicuously, I would like to advice yo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, thus, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 947.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42523364486 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59650406275 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654205607477 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0439299858 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0909090909 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4545454545 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162241757436 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469354988112 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057323753646 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0759695579634 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611423562347 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.