You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.
Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter
explain why you are writing
describe your circumstances
ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course
You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:
Dear
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir / Madam,
I came across your course pamphlet in one of the publications with an offer during enrollment. Because of which, I'm writing to request you to provide me a feasible exception to enroll this course and build my career expectations.
Though, I had completed my engineering graduation with higher grade, but that does not provide me recognition in career growth because of my inability to develop my soft-skill.
My misfortune, I have been told to quit my job by my employer due to the lack of ability in self development. Since it is considered as core skill in corporate organization. On various instances, this often occurred to me instead of mentoring me to excel in that skills. So I decided to take up the new skill development course, However, I haven't met the eligibility criteria of having basic elementary course.
Therefore, I place my humble request to you to review and provide me an exception to get the benefit of this course which could enable me to elevate my skills and ability to next level and I were able to sustain in the market as well to run my family smoothly.
Yours Faithfully,
Ganesh Prakasam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...er during enrollment. Because of which, Im writing to request you to provide me a ...
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Line 7, column 341, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...ew skill development course, However, I havent met the eligibility criteria of having ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 955.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84771573604 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90122832667 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644670050761 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.8464845753 44.8134815571 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.111111111 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100319463821 0.216113520407 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0383244960177 0.0766984524023 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366344704202 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0630015235929 0.12726935374 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314577020833 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.