You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
A friend who lives in a different city has invited you to his/her daughter's 8th birthday. However, you can not accept the invitation due to some personal reasons.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter:
• thank him for the invitation
• mention why you can not attend the birthday party
• offer to meet him some other day
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Robert,
Hello, how are you? Hope that you are having a joyous time. I am writing this letter to express my happiness on the 8th Birthday party of Julie. I wish her best in life but I apologise that I will not be able to attend the party
I wish Julie a very Happy Birthday. May all her wishes and desires come true. I would also like to thank you for inviting me to her birthday party. I want to be a part of the birthday party but due to office work pressure it will be difficult for me to attend her birthday party.
Last month, I was promoted to the position of senior manager in my organisation and I have to manage all the work and ensure that there are o faults and flaws. Moreover, since it is the end of the financial year there is a lot of work pressure and many crucial projects of the organisation has to be completed within the deadline to ensure company’s growth an investor’s satisfaction.
I will organise all my work in the office and will plan a visit to meet you and Julie in Canada next month. I will try to stay with you for a couple of days and we will have a lot of fun and enjoyment.
Once again, I apologise for not being a part of Julie’s Birthday party.
I hope to see you soon. Take care.
With love,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 229, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t I will not be able to attend the party I wish Julie a very Happy Birthday. May ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...will not be able to attend the party I wish Julie a very Happy Birthday. May a...
^
Line 17, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ake care. With love, Prabhpreet Kaur
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1044.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 244.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.27868852459 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53829842257 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524590163934 0.622605031667 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 332.1 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5248285393 44.8134815571 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5714285714 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4285714286 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.78571428571 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159595663466 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623013224465 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560166860575 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867734017857 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633533322379 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.