Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Diponkor working as an executive in Orion Pharma Limited. I am a frequent customer of your luxurious hotel. I am writing this letter to express my deep concern about my favorite watch which I lost in your hotel.
Last week I was a guest at your hotel and stayed for three days from 7th June to 10th June 2021. I remember that when I left the hotel before one hour I went to the washroom. When I took off my watch on the beside of washbasin my room. This watch is very important to me because my wife gifted me on the occasion of our wedding anniversary.
The brand name of this watch is Omega and it was a white dial with a golden frame. It has also a golden chain belt. The watch gives an alarm every hour and it can be shown in dark places.
As I already informed you about the importance of my watch, now I am looking forward to your help to get back my watch. Therefore, I would like to request you to take all the necessary steps as soon as possible.
Hopefully, I will get a positive response from you.
Yours sincerely
Diponkor
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...quent customer of your luxurious hotel. I am writing this letter to express my de...
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Line 5, column 176, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...before one hour I went to the washroom. When I took off my watch on the beside of wa...
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Line 9, column 213, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he necessary steps as soon as possible. Hopefully, I will get a positive respons...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 875.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28921568627 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35385501045 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617647058824 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.9698433251 44.8134815571 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.5 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5714285714 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.07142857143 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265806945905 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078423497455 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058245028033 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137643218188 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591411036287 0.0580467560999 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.01 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.