Dear John,
I hope you are doing well.
I have been missing Sydney since I back to my country, the unforgettable part is how your generous host and drive me to the business conference every time, which I have attended to. Thanks to you and your family wholeheartedly.
Unfortunately, I forgot the original dissertation paper that contains my research works all year round. The paper in the blue plastic case with white flowers on it. You could see a spider man sticker at the corner of the case, that is my nephew put on it so definitely easy to recognize it. I do not have any other copies in my hands so please check the room carefully where I stayed, I think it should be there.
Would you please send me that paper over the post and request the post office to use the fastest one to deliver. Please let me know the cost and your bank account number, I will transfer you the fees immediately.
Thank you in advance and hope I have chance to take care of you when you come to my country someday.
Kind regards,
Joe
- Some people think that children should learn to paint or draw at school. Others believe it is just a waste of time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 67
- Science will soon make people live up to 100 or even 200 years. Some believe this is a good thing while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 61
- Today, many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and less time on outdoor sports. Why, is it a positive or negative development. 73
- Many people think that having more money will make them happier How important is money to happiness 84
- In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extend do you agree or disagree? 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 847.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45789473684 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47239047916 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652631578947 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6116391439 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.54545454545 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254225117728 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985200936492 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0878958407227 0.0603063233224 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157507706077 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559852403118 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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